(Spoilers) This was the first game I played for the Game jam because it had a pretty nice looking icon. I usually focus more on the story then other stuff and the story was decent. It had some things I found more unique. I do think that the story feels a bit fast. Something that usually helps is to space out the more plot heavy dialogue from the less is the have some wait events between the text boxes. Its something I do and it really helps. Most of the event triggers worked great. But there were a few. In my first playthrow I (Not on purpose) killed the jewles guy and because of that didnt meet the fairy queen. But I still had the power to speak to mom at the end. I dont know if that was suppose to happen but I thought I might tell you.
Thank you for the feedback and for taking the time to play the game! I had to kind of condense the game and make the story happen faster because of the limited time of the jam. The fairy queen skip was an accident as well, so thanks for telling me about that. Again, thanks for your time and for the detailed feedback. I hope you enjoyed your time with the game.
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(Spoilers)
This was the first game I played for the Game jam because it had a pretty nice looking icon. I usually focus more on the story then other stuff and the story was decent. It had some things I found more unique. I do think that the story feels a bit fast. Something that usually helps is to space out the more plot heavy dialogue from the less is the have some wait events between the text boxes. Its something I do and it really helps. Most of the event triggers worked great. But there were a few. In my first playthrow I (Not on purpose) killed the jewles guy and because of that didnt meet the fairy queen. But I still had the power to speak to mom at the end. I dont know if that was suppose to happen but I thought I might tell you.
Overal pretty solid little game. Keep it up
Thank you for the feedback and for taking the time to play the game! I had to kind of condense the game and make the story happen faster because of the limited time of the jam. The fairy queen skip was an accident as well, so thanks for telling me about that. Again, thanks for your time and for the detailed feedback. I hope you enjoyed your time with the game.
No problem and goodluck with your futher game dev endeavors